Vision is not a possession of all.
It belongs only to those
Who allow their minds
The grace of wild flight
Wings that wander to other worlds
A restlessness to be quelled
Only on finding the right answers.
PS: I’m trying my hands at Visual Poetry. There’s still a lot to learn and the above is my baby step. I know there’s a lot to discover. Wish me well.
You nailed it Mama Zee. I shall come for lessons.
Beautiful piece this is.
… So true, not all that see truly see.
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You are a gentle lamb but wildly multidimensional. Your vision is sure not domesticated….
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🙂 Thank you Swag. I’m tripping for you right now 😉
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Just right now??…😢😢….thought you have always tripped..
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This is a special tripping session, duh 🙂
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😅😅
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A wonderful job you did here
Could hardly say it’s your first.
Keep it coming.
Amazing…
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Thank you Julianah
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I like
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Thank you Iheanyi. Good to have you visit.
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Ewooo..
I didn’t see the picture before. This phone thing sef..
NICE! Well done jare. ..This is good.
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Ok. Well. Thanks😄
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Aw! This is most definitely NOT a sight for sore eyes…..its stunning, its art! 😃😄 I absolutely love this Zee! Both the visual and text make more than a world of sense! Helen Keller asserts that the only thing worse than being blind, is having sight but no vision! So am guessing everyone’s got sight but some fall short of vision!
You’re pretty unpredictable Honeycomb, and you keep pushing the boundaries……going beyond the limits! Way to go girl, you gat MAD skillz! 😎👉
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Lol! Thanks sis. Totally copy your lines 🙂 I need to hone them skills more…
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Ziks, lovely. Methinks you did well here and you know I wouldn’t flatter you.
I am thinking though that we can collapse the first two lines into one to read:
Vision belongs only to those. ..
As you know, we seek to condense and should remove whatever can be taken out.
I like the line ‘the grace of wild flight’ Cool irony. To think that wildness can be termed as something linked to grace. … Nice.
We shall watch on, dear sis, as you journey on, to the wild. 🙂 You have grace. You have us.
Cheers.
From:”Zika’s Musings” Date:Fri, 18 Sep, 2015 at 11:00 Subject:[New post] Sight Not For All
zikaolofin posted: ” Vision is not a possession of all. It belongs only to those Who allow their minds The grace of wild flight Wings that wander to other worlds A restlessness to be quelled Only on finding the right answers. PS: I’m trying my hands at Visu”
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Hello Su’eddie. Thank you my friend. i shall work on doing better at it, next time. How are you doing?
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I dey bamn jare. Just following you up and down. No small task. Phew! Na wa o. 🙂 Impressive output.
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☺😅Thanks. I’m celebrating after all. So I gotta dole ‘ em out, no?
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Lol!!!!
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Good luck. I look forward to seeing more.
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Thank you dunkleschönheit. Glad you enjoyed my silliness 🙂
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Ah! This is lovely. You sure did great with the arrangement ma’am. Bon! Bon!
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Aw; Thanks Me. I’m happy it made some sense…
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