I’m journeying back to the place – your heart
The only room whose doors never closed
I’m driving thru these streets – your ways
They hold familiar fondest memories
I’m totally trusting my tour guide – your hands
They work me thru the basics of the neighborhood
We come to a rare attraction – the scar
The unsavory relic of our breakup fight
Just across is the post office – your ears
In it I dropped every letter formed on my lips
I cannot forget the clinic – your bosom
It gave me the best therapy, second to none
I try to take a quick shot at the park – your mind
It inspired the best games ever
Finally, I stand at the door of your heart. You open.
Your eyes ask a million unbelieving times: Are you back for real, for good?
I murmur a thousand shameful yeses
I never should have broken this heart
The only place that ever was home
Aw! This is so romantic Honeycomb and I am totally charmed! Every line, you really took your pretty little time and made it work so well! Nothing beats that feeling of an erring, straying lover who finds his way back home to his beloved, who was just waiting in the wings, with arms loving and widespread, hopeful that her boo will come running right back to her, some day! Plus, I can tell you from thence on out, that those two will make very beautiful musics together, never to part no more! Gat till its gone, sometimes, it takes being on the verge of losing something magnificently precious, to jerk one back to reality and this right here, sounds so much like it! *winks* LOL
Home’s where the heart is, the heart’s where we’ve gotten our treasures all stored up in, so really, there’s no place like home, no matter how far we travel or stray! Home, sweet blissful home! Awesome this, a masterpiece in all of its glorious entirety! You’ve got game ma sister, and aint nuttin’ lame ’bout your game! You go gurl, Wow! LMAO!
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ohh Yemms, I learn from every single comment you leave in my corner. You speak your own mind and you let us all have it, full blast.
Indeed, coming back together after separation should solidify a relationship since it will afford them the chance to start on a clean slate.
I’m hoping that people who are separated from their love, and see the need to go back, do not stay back from doing so.
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Great post! Did you draw the little picture? Its so perfect with your post.
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Thanks dearie. No the picture was not mine. I actually forgot to include the picture credit. Will work on that.
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Your blog is great! I really enjoy your writing 🙂
I have just nominated you for the Liebster Award!
Check out link for more information…
https://amyvanya.wordpress.com/2015/02/02/liebster-award/
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I love this so much. Well done Zee
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Thank you Amity.
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Just Beautiful!
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Thank you sire.
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a father’s love…
a child’s journey back home..
home, where the heart is
welcome home, child
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Topie, You will lend me ya mind one of this days…see how u break am down…..beautifulmind u gat
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oya na…just give me yours…
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Hahaha! Topazo, thanks for giving me a good laugh. Hmm, “just give me yours.”
Nice one.
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Thank you o jare, Topazo. I really appreciate your comment.
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..absolutely lovely!!!!!! I think this is your best so far…but I know you will prove me wrong again with your next post…Keep dropping it hot sis…
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Hello Dr. Swag. Thank you for the vote of confidence. Hope I don’t disappoint, lol!
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Enchanting piece Zee.
Makes one feel the need
for Love…
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Thank you Jules. Of course everyone is entitled to this feeling…all of us, no exception. Hope you’re doing ok sweetie?
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Doing alright dearest.
And I hope you’re doing
great too…*Hugs*
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I’m ok
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Beautifully written. You are very talented. This really resonated with me today.
Please check out my blog : http://www.hoplesslyromanticcinderella.wordpress.com
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Hello, thank you for coming by my little space. I appreciate your comments and will certainly be visiting your blog in a bit. Catchya.
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Can’t wait to see you on my side of the world soon 🙂 Take care. x
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