i wish there were many more lightnings
or maybe a few
or just one
for it was in that one silver moment
i saw you in your purest form –
plain naked beauty
i’m struck at once with sympathy for David
and the lure
of bathsheba
now I wish there were no lightning
or that my eyes be blank –
a clean slate with no mosaic
Beautiful poem well captured.
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☺Thank you
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MotherZee, MamaZee herself is back.
Beautiful poem. I love the last verse so much because one has such moments one wished one saw nothing or heard nothing.
Compliments of the season to you
Cheers
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Hey, yes it feels good to be back. I see you’ve been keeping the blogosphere warm with all your beautiful posts☺
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😀 thank you MamaZee.
Hope you are back for good and you got some great stuffs for us too?
Happy new year!
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My Lady Zee!
Missing you seriously.
Hope you’re doing great?
In between, didactic piece!
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Hey Jules, howdy do? Good to hear from you and glad you enjoyed this piece.
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That is lovely. The moment exquisite but never to be recaptured in the same unique passionate beauty.
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(Smiling) Hello Lizl. I know the feeling….(still smiling)
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Welcome back to these plains Homegurl, its really nice to have you back…..you were sorely missed! And a banging post to announce your ‘Blogcoming’ too….such an allure! Let. It. Snow! I love it! LMAO!
‘The Silver Moment’….. that million dollar moment of weakness, (right before the veil falls off of our eyes and we become disenchanted, dispassionate, with the object of our affection); we when we cave in to the lustful desires of the flesh and passion! Seductively, magically captured….. Wow! You go gurl and welcome back again! Happy Holidays to you and all your adorables! Mwah! LOL
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Helloooo! Yeah, I know. I missed you guys even more. It does feel good to be back. And I see you’ve been controlling the space. La reine herself….hahaha. Good to see ya homegurl!!!
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