Away with love
And away with its lies
A way it is
Of feeding me the highs
Away with hate
I’ll forgive one more time
There ne’er was time to die
Than the moment of truth
Away with cheer
This fairy make-up tale
The ruse contrived
To keep me in limbo
Away with sorrow
Else, away with life
Of what use is the life
That ne’er was lived at all
That’s a poem of great intensity and power! I love both the form and the content, I can totally relate to the feelings described so powerfully. Thank you so much for sharing your piece!
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Thank you Mara for the opportunity
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Anytime!
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I liked this a lot, great response to the prompt!
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Thank you Benedict
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Great poem π
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Thank you
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Reading through this made me wish it’s that easy to do away with all the frustration and frustrating things surrounding me…
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Sweetheart, in time you will let go, so as to make space for better, more beautiful things π»πΌππΊπΉ
I reflect on the meaning of your name and again I’m happy, I am youthful βΊ
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Oh. Youthful? Is that what my name means? Wow. Sure didn’t know. Thanks dear Lady Zee. *Hugs*
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That last verse really got me going! A life of sorrows is no life at all! Thank God for little mercies that it isn’t always the case! Though weeping endures for a night, there’s always the hope that joy will come in the morning! The tides keep turning and that makes life what it is…a cocktail of happenstances elicting various different emotions from we Earthlings! ππ
The seemingly nonchalance of the Poet I find pretty interesting! At the end of the day, deep down; we wanna experience all of these emotions, cause only then can we be said to have lived! Kudos Zee, you’re right on course! πβ€
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Indeed Yemie, you couldn’t have put it any better….life’s a cocktail of happenstance. I appreciate your insightful comment dear. Thank you.
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